Spell strings

[*Splork*]

I need spell strings for the following spells; Frostbolt, Corrosive Tears, Thunder Clap, and Blizzard.

I need the string the player sees when it is cast, and the string the room sees when a spell is cast.

Example, firewind
Demogorgon vanishes in a burning wind.
You are blasted by a painful burning wind!! THAT REALLY HURT!!



Enjoy,
Splork

Ill give 5 drachma per string I use....

[Rynquald]

Firstly, i have never written anything at all before, so these quite possibly may suck They might also be a bit long/melodramatic in places, but i like the spells you can get your teath into.

Frostbolt:
Rynquald draws frost out of the nearby air and hurls it at Demogorgon.

You are struck by a bolt of some freezing substance from Rynquald's hands.

You expel the warmth from the air surrounding you, and force the resulting frost towards Demogorgon.


Corrosive Tears:

Tears of burning acid rain from the sky upon Demogorgon at an elaborate gesture from Rynquald.

A corrosive liquid descends upon you in hundreds of tiny droplets as Rynquald completes his spell.

You cause a searing acid to fall from the sky upon Demogorgon like the tears of some demonic presence


Thunder Clap:

Rynquald raises his hands to the heavens and a massive clap of thunder sounds, crushing Demogorgon in it's Pressure wave. (this one looks a little long to me, but it fits in sloth without wraping to the next line)

You feel an enormous pressure against you as Rynquald's magical thunder reverberates in the air.

You conjure an explosion of thunder over Demogorgon that pulverises him for several seconds.


Blizzard (area version):

A blizzard rushes in from the north, bathing everything nearby in a deadly hail of ice and snow.

The world turns completely white and you feel razor sharp shards of ice swirl around you.

You summon the powers of winter to form a lethal hail of ice that fills the room.


Blizzard (targeted version):

Rynquald forces elemental ice to swarm around and slice at Demogorgon.

The world turns completely white and you feel razor sharp shards of ice swirl around you.

You summon the powers of winter to send a lethal blizzard upon Demogorgon.


Please don't laugh at me

[Dariel]

"Your frosbolt kills a mob."
It is not a very descriptive string, I suggest changing it to something nicer.

Anybody got better ideas for the string?

[Weasel]

{mobname} explodes into thousands of icy shards as your frostbolt finishes it off.